

Walt drains his savings, and has a face-off with bullies who taunt his son at a clothing store. Elsewhere, Marie (Skyler’s sister) notices something off with Walt, which Skyler denies. Walt and Dupree strategize how and where they will cook meth together. Walt makes Dupree a offer: they can team up and cook meth together, or he’ll turn Dupree in. During the raid, Walt notices a former student (in the script, named Marion Dupree, but who later becomes Jesse Pinkman) at the house/secret meth lab. He doesn’t tell Skyler about his diagnosis right away, but he does yell at his boss, and ask Hank if he can go on his meth-bust ride-along. Walt learns he has cancer, and he’s got maybe two years to live. Walt appears to be quite ill, and half of a lack-luster marriage. We meet Walt (a brilliant high school chemistry teacher) and his family (including his pregnant wife Skyler, and his wife’s brother-in-law, a DEA agent named Hank). Here is the story structure for the Breaking Bad Pilot screenplay: Exposition Tommy has a stern talk with Chris and the two rejoin the party.STORY BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE OF THE BREAKING BAD PILOT SCREENPLAY However, Christopher feels neglected and has a talk with Tommy about how he wasn’t even thanked for taking care of the rival mob/waste management issue. Tommy Jr’s birthday party can finally happen, with everyone together and having a barbecue. This would secure his reputation is secured and he can collect the insurance money. And Tommy asks one of his top guys, Silvio, to burn down Artie’s restaurant. Tommy’s “nephew” Christopher kills one of the Czech’s to keep their contract in the waste management business. The gambler decides to help pay off his debt to the Soprano gang via fraudulent health insurance claims.

Junior says something will have to be done about Tommy. Uncle Junior and Livia bond over their on-going frustration and possible hatred for Tommy, decrying his generation and how the two old timers feel neglected. Meadow emerges the “victor” by deciding on her own to focus on school and not go to Aspen. Plot Point ThreeĬarmela and Meadow continue to have some tension, but eventually this is resolved. Melfi for good, where he opens up further about his family problems and how they truly affect him. During the visit, Livia gets upset and Tommy finds himself having another panic attack. Livia is adamant she doesn’t want to be put into a retirement home, but the Soprano family shows her one anyway. In between family troubles, Tommy also has to deal with: a gambler who owes him money (he says he doesn’t have it), a waste management contract that they might lose to a competitor (a Czech mob crew), and the fact that Uncle Junior wants to kill someone at a restaurant owned by Tommy’s old friend Artie (Junior refuses to call off the hit). He has trouble with both his mother, Livia, and his uncle, Uncle Junior, who is also in the mob with him and resents Tommy’s rise. Melfi, where he explains: there are problems brewing between his wife Carmela and their daughter Meadow (who wants to go to Aspen and Carmela won’t allow it). At the recommendation of his neighbor (who is also his physician), Tommy goes to see a psychiatrist, Dr.

It turns out he had a panic attack, something that strikes him as highly unusual. Inciting Incidentĭuring his son Tommy Jr’s birthday party, Tommy collapses and later has to go to the hospital. While on the outside he lives a good life, with a wife, kids, and a group of loyal men working under him, all is not well deep down. Tommy Soprano (as he is named in the script) is a mob boss who is rising up in his family. Here is the story structure for The Sopranos pilot screenplay: Exposition The Sopranos pilot screenplay is very close to the final product, but there are a few differences, most notably Tony Soprano being named Tommy. STORY BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE OF THE SOPRANOS PILOT SCREENPLAY
